Hi Ana I really liked how you talked about going on a trip to the cinema's and watched an amazing movie. I also like how you described what happened with adjectives. I think your piece of writing would be more enjoyable to read if you added another paragraph or so but otherwise I hope you keep writing and and posting.
Hi Ana I really liked how you talked about going on a trip to the cinema's and watched an amazing movie. I also like how you described what happened with adjectives. I think your piece of writing would be more enjoyable to read if you added another paragraph or so but otherwise I hope you keep writing and and posting.
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